Talk:Mayflower MRT station/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:38, 6 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"Estate, Kebun Baru Community" overlinked.
"and CHIJ St Nicholas..." formal title is Saint, not St
"inspired by mayflowers" tone issues, this is something the artist would say, not an encyclopedia.
"Thomson line on " relink here and add (TSL) again.
"Mayflower Station " capital S for station?
"ERL to form the TEL" explain and link these terms first time in the main part of the article.
"slope had made" -had.
"TEL 2 " or TEL2?
Are there any details of service to the station?
"by SMRT Trains" link.
"CHIJ St. Nicholas" Saint, not St (or St.)
Link landmarks again here which you linked in the lead.
"the seven species of birds that are kept as pets" is that a legal restriction?
"Civil Defence shelter" (CD), and is there a link?
It's not a stub.

That's it for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:07, 11 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

ZKang123 are you going to address these comments? The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:12, 19 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Oh sorry. Yes I have addressed them. Forgot to reply.--ZKang123 (talk) 08:13, 19 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]