Talk:Marie Antoinette and Her Children/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:24, 9 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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  • Create the redirect for the alt name for this work at Marie Antoinette of Lorraine-Habsburg, Queen of France, and Her Children
  • The refs in the lead can be placed in the main body where those facts are covered.
  • "the French artist" no need to link French people.
  • "year, Élisabeth Vigée Le Brun was" relink artist in the main body.
  • "Mars Room in the Palace of Versailles" link(s).
  • "the Dauphin at" link for Dauphin?
  • "by Renaissance depictions" link.
  • "her children are her" were.
  • "Presentation of the Queen's Office in the Grand Couvert antechamber" forgive me, what does that mean?
  • Ref 4 needs en-dash.
  • Ref 6, no need for SHOUTING.

That's all I have. Nice article. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:29, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man:  Task complete. JeBonSer (talk | sign) 14:37, 10 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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