This article is within the scope of WikiProject Indigenous peoples of North America, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Native Americans, Indigenous peoples in Canada, and related indigenous peoples of North America on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Indigenous peoples of North AmericaWikipedia:WikiProject Indigenous peoples of North AmericaTemplate:WikiProject Indigenous peoples of North AmericaIndigenous peoples of North America articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Mining, a collaborative project to organize and improve articles related to mining and mineral industries. If you would like to participate, you can edit the attached article, or visit the project page, where you can see a list of open tasks, join in the discussion, or join the project.MiningWikipedia:WikiProject MiningTemplate:WikiProject MiningMining articles
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 03:49, 24 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
A lot the notability of this topic is related to violence against Indigenous women—especially in the journal literature—so I think it's warranted to mention it. I also think leaving out information about what a man camp is makes it more 'hooky'.Larataguera (talk) 01:20, 6 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Larataguera: I agree. I try to make hooks as concise as possible. What do you think of Alt2?
@Mgreason: I'm unsure the status of your review. --evrik(talk) 22:47, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Evrik: I am presently reviewing the article, checking cited sources, etc. I should be finished tomorrow. Mgrē@sŏn (Talk) 18:12, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Evrik: I've finished the review, and everything passes. I'd like to suggest Alt2 as the hook? Shorter hooks grab attention, and it looks like the violence issue is the most important point of the article. Mgrē@sŏn (Talk) 00:14, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Sounds good. Go ahead and give this a green check! Thanks.--evrik(talk) 02:38, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I want to add some commas to this hook, as shown in ALT2a below: