Talk:Luis Muriel/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:03, 12 November 2017 (UTC)

Will review. Expect comments soon. MWright96 (talk) 10:03, 12 November 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Wikilink Serie A Best Young Revelation as you have done in the prose
• "He spent two-and-a-half seasons with the club, scoring 21 goals in 79 league appearances before joining current club Sevilla in 2017. " - think we can get away by omitting "current club" since its already established that the currently places for the club not to earlier in the lead

Deportivo Cali

• " Muriel joined Colombian Primera A side Deportivo Cali in January 2012." - it should be January 2009 as indiicated in the career statstics table
• "before scoring 'scoring nine goals in 10 appearances the following season" - remove the second mention of the word "scoring"
• "Udinese officially completed the signing of Muriel, who was 19-years-old at the time, on 30 May 2010 for a reported fee of €1.5m." - here's an improvement Udinese officially completed the signing of Muriel, who was 19 at the time, on 30 May 2010 for a reported fee of €1.5 million
• "Shortly after his arrive in Udine, however, he was loaned to Segunda División side Granada." - arrival and this sentence is lacking a citation.

Return to Udinese

• "with the club manager insiting that he needed to lose five pounds," Use the convert template to convert five pounds into kilograms
• "including a spell of zero goals in 11 matches" - including a speed without any goals in 11 matches

Sevilla

• "netting the winner in a 1-0 victory over Girona." - the hyphen should be replaced by the en dash as has been done earlier in the article

Colombia national U20 team

• "he scored the only goal of the match as Colombia beat Korea Republic 1–0 to progress from the group stages with a perfect record." - ge scored the only goal of the match as Colombia defeated the Korea Republic 1–0 to progress from the group stages with a perfect record. - also Korea Republic is a dab link.
• "Muriel ultimately scored four goals for the tournament before Colombia were knocked out by Mexico in the quarter-finals." - this statement requires a citation

It's a neat effort you have put in as far. On hold until everything I have raised above has been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 12:25, 12 November 2017 (UTC)

Hi MWright96, thank you very much for the review. I've made all of the above changes as per your recommendations. The only instance where I deviated slightly from your review was in point 3 of Deportivo Cali above where I removed reference to his age altogether. Please let me know if there are any further concerns. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker (talk) 13:26, 12 November 2017 (UTC)

• • @Liam E. Bekker: Thank you for your quick response to my queries. Can now promote to GA. Note: I have made a small alteration to the prose to a statement which sounded a little informal. MWright96 (talk) 13:55, 12 November 2017 (UTC)