Talk:Long Range Desert Group/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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'GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Has a lot of info.

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    hundredweight is a dablink. Are you counting by imperial or US units?
Not really a dab link but have specified imperial
  1. B. MoS compliance:
    In /*Post 1943 operations*/, please change the battle of Leros into Battle of Leros
Changed to Battle --Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:24, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Change section Operations to History. WikiCopterRadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 16:24, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Changed to History --Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:24, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  1. A copyedit would be appreciated. WikiCopterRadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 20:41, 24 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Anything in particular its already had one from the Copy Editors Guild ? --Jim Sweeney (talk) 08:41, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


  1. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
    Quite a few references. Much more than my Arado Ar E.381.
  2. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    Legacy could be expanded
There nothing much can be added. They like the old soldier just faded away, the Special Air Service in all the armies involved British, New Zealand and Rhodesian took over this type of operation. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:24, 18 August 2010
I have added a bit more about being part of the SAS Association to the section. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 09:19, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

(UTC)

  1. B. Focused:
  2. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  3. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
    Warring is not good. This article does not have it.
  4. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
    very descriptive captions.
  5. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    Needs improvement

WikiCopterRadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 00:14, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiCopterRadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 23:40, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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