Talk:Lázaro Cárdenas/Archive 1

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Archive 1

Untitled

This article seems to have more information than many of the Mexican president's but it could still use some refining. More sub headings could be appropriate, as well as more thoroughness in each of the ummbrella headings already in place. It is a very good starting point but still needs more depth.

Up for deletion

I am unsure as to the thruthfulness of this article as there are no sources/references, and so i have to put it up for deletion and add the hoax banner.

(1) Who are you? It would seem that anyone who won't sign in and sign their posts shouldn't do anything drastic here. (2) Yes, the article would benefit from references, but much of what is written is common knowledge. It's not that bad. --Lavintzin 00:09, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Needs a rewrite

This whole article is written very poorly, the prose and grammar make it nearly unreadable. And it lacks citations. It sounds like a history book filtered through a 7th grader.