Talk:Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics

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Review: June 4, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

Passed. 48JCLTALK 00:54, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Arconning (talk · contribs) 16:17, 30 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: 48JCL (talk · contribs) 22:25, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Time to review! 48JCLTALK 22:25, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): Main aspects covered, and is focused. It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: not sure how you’re supposed to be quote unquote not neutral anyways. It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Copyvio[edit]

Earwig shows 6.5%.

Source spot-check[edit]

Reviewed refs 1 to 13 along with some others, seems good.

Final comments[edit]

Good luck on the GT! Addressed some minor style issues and other issues. Good work! Passed. 48JCLTALK 00:52, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Did you know nomination[edit]

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... that judoka Kinaua Biribo used her participation for Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics to combat domestic violence and rising sea levels?

Source: https://www.theguardian.com/world/2021/jul/17/she-can-do-it-kiribati-olympic-judo-hopeful-wants-to-combat-domestic-violence

ALT1: ... that a high jumper became a sprinter to qualify for Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics? Source: https://www.pacificaussports.gov.au/our-stories/lataisi-mwea-kiribati-my-tokyo-olympic-journey
ALT2: ... that the delegation of Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics stayed with the delegation of Australia? Source: https://www.abc.net.au/news/2021-07-19/widening-wealth-gap-tokyo-olympics-pacific-asia-athletes/100295268?
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Improved to Good Article status by Arconning (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Arconning (talk) 03:42, 4 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

@Arconning: New enough and long enough. First hook looks good too; since the source mentions her participation before the games, how about "intended" instead of "used"? Curlymanjaro (talk) 20:49, 5 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Curlymanjaro: So it would be, ... that judoka Kinaua Biribo intended to use her participation for Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics to combat domestic violence and rising sea levels? Arconning (talk) 02:56, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  - @Arconning: That works too! How about, "... that judoka Kinaua Biribo hoped to use her participation ..."? Curlymanjaro (talk) 19:34, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    - @Curlymanjaro: Yep that's alright! Just waiting for your approval. Arconning (talk) 03:09, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      - Happy with this - great work. Curlymanjaro (talk) 13:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]