Talk:Kill the Lights (Britney Spears song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Petergriffin9901 (talk • message • contribs • count • logs • email) 09:48, 2 September 2011 (UTC)
- 1 Disemg link Done
- 2 Dead links Done only one, still searching for the other one... - Sauloviegas (talk) 09:48, 2 September 2011 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- that talks about the singer's relationship -> that alludes too Done
- who considered the song a sequel -> it Done
- considered, considered Done
- rmv did Done
- italicize Billboard Done
- and visiting another planet full of lights -> I expect better grammar Done
- was featured Done
Background[edit]
- Link LR Done
- confirmed development of the album -> GR (What is this? - Sauloviegas (talk) 09:47, 2 September 2011 (UTC))
- Grammar. Re-write.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 03:36, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
- That long sentence should be separated and proper punctuation should be placed Done
- He said he was inspired by Hans Zimmer's scores, such as Pirates of the Caribbean soundtracks -> He credited "" as a primary source of inspiration
- On November 13, 2008, the song leaked a month before the album's official release -> Th song leaked on November 13, 2008, a full month before the album's official release
- on the forth season
- How was it featured? (Played, intro song. etc.?)
- along with "Circus"' Junior Vasquez Club Circus Remix. -> rmv double quote. Also, better "the Junior Vasquez Club Circus Remix of "Circus".
Composition[edit]
- The sample needs a much more in depth descriptive rational (with sources)
- that talks about -> again
- was considered as a sequel of it, -> was considered its sequel
- the fact that Spears is introduced by Danja as "Our very own Pop princess / Now Queen of Pop" -> Why?
- claiming the singer's vocals are heavily processed in the song -> while describing her vocals as heavily produced
Reception[edit]
- "Kill the Lights" received positive reviews from music critics -> NPOV. There are negative reviews as well
- Too many "ands" being used as connectors
- Too many "saids"
- me","
- Link TS
- Link Madonna
- MoS issues. When in quotes, the album should appear 'Blackout'
- This section needs a lot of tightening
- On the dated
- while its host album Circus -> parent
- sixty-nine on Pop 100,
- seventy-two on Pop 100 Airplay
Music video[edit]
- No need to write "Britney.com". -> Official website is enough
- The winner of the contest would get to see their story becoming a plot for an official music video of a song -> needs significant re-writing
- for "Kill the Lights" title "Known Everywhere", that was revealed on February 11, 2009, -> Read this out loud. You are missing some things
- are in the back taking -> background?
- Right after, wee see an animated Spears -> poor writing; also, your hand appeared to have gone numb while pressing the E key :P
- he last three lines really need more professional writing
Credits[edit]
- The source should be introduced. Look at The Emancipation of Mimi to understand
References[edit]
- Several are missing accessdates
- 1 should appear in italics and as People, not People.com. Also, you are missing a publisher
- Same for 2
- What's with 3?
- What makes 5 reliable?
- 6 should appear in a more detailed format
- Why does Britney.com appear in both italics and not?
- 10; publisher?
- 11 needs work
- Several newspapers require you to use the "cite news" template; #s 22, 23
- Similar issues persist. Why is Allmusic is italics?
- Article is now placed on hold. Any questions and/or concerns will be replied to here. Good luck.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 03:36, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
- I think I have fixed everything. Take a look and tell me if there is something still. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 17:21, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
- Article is now placed on hold. Any questions and/or concerns will be replied to here. Good luck.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 03:36, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
- Nice work Salo. I'm passing :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 12:47, 5 September 2011 (UTC)