A fact from Khumarawayh ibn Ahmad ibn Tulun appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 24 October 2015 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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I'll start on this over the next couple of days. (A standard GAN; or the full, headed-for-FAC, treatment?) Gog the Mild (talk) 13:55, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Gog the Mild, I don't think that in its present state it qualifies for A-class/FA. It is definitely a fairly complete treatment (definitely the most comprehensive one I know of) but not at the level of detail I would aspire to for the higher ratings. Nevertheless, as usual, feel free to be as nitpicky as you want. Kick the tires to your heart's content :) Constantine ✍ 16:34, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I have been bold in my copy editing, so you will want to check it.
"His father, Ahmad ibn Tulun, was the son of a Turkish slave who had been appointed governor of Egypt since 868" Was his father or the slave appointed governor?
Sources: Bonner: the title should be in title case.
Hmm. Assessing for GAN, that's all I can find. You haven't lost your touch. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:04, 17 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Done and thanks, Gog the Mild :). Beyond GA criteria, comprehensibility etc.? Constantine ✍ 09:01, 19 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Another great little article and I am happy to promote.
Beyond GA it is pretty good. Some minor issues I would want to discuss with you if it were at FAC, but nothing black and white, so I left them. It is, IMO, FACable as it stands. Gog the Mild (talk) 10:03, 19 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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