Talk:Kamares ware

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From the paragraph starting "today" the article has multiple issues--starting from incorrect attribution of sources (Sharon Zuckerman rather than "Sharo"; incorrect citation of the article from which this contents was [presumably] taken); through incorrect (indeed often incomprehensible) English. But mainly, the entire discussion is out of place. It shifts the center of gravity of the article from its essence (Cretan ceramics) to a detail (two sherds found in Hazor, Israel). Ilan Sharon (talk) 08:43, 20 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Adding a link to the word pithoi, mentioned in the third paragraph, would be a wise idea so people who know nothing about pithoi can easily connect to an article about it. Also, in the third paragraph there are two sentences back-to-back that discuss the tone colors of the Kamares ware. I think having one sentence that summarizes the colors would be better. JuneHodge11 (talk) 19:17, 17 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]