Talk:KVDO-TV/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • Infobox looks good.
  • Excellent lead (well-sourced and of reasonable length)!

History of channel 3 in Salem[edit]

  • Remove the comma after "Salem in 1952".
  • "Telecasters's" → "Telecasters'"
  • I consider "Salem Telecasters" a singular noun per MOS:POSS, so I left this as is.
  • No other issues (also well-sourced).

KVDO-TV as a commercial independent[edit]

  • "telecasting February" → "telecasting on February"
  • "first ever" → "first-ever"
  • "with quality" → "with the quality"
  • Remove the comma after "$410,000".

Sale to OEPBS[edit]

  • "by Oregon Educational" → "by the Oregon Educational"
  • Remove the comma after "lead by December".
  • Add a comma after "two newscasts"
  • "prime time" → "primetime" or "prime-time"

Public KVDO[edit]

  • "including of the" → "including the"
  • "of channel 16, while" → "for channel 16 while"
  • "Deschutes County" → "Deschutes County's"
  • That hatnote at the bottom seems out of place. Move it somewhere else, or a #See_also section can be made.

References[edit]

  • Try archiving sources (especially those from Newspapers.com, which will disappear if the title changes).

Progress[edit]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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