Talk:Johnny Dickshot/GA1

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 21:39, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:39, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

I appreciate it. I'm sure clipping the sources helped give you a sense of the subject. No rush. – Muboshgu (talk) 16:53, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Review

• He won the nickname "Ugly" won? Maybe he carried the nickname?

• How about "received"? – Muboshgu (talk) 23:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
  • That's fine

• Can you expand a little on Martha? Maybe He had a sister, Martha, who managed and played for the Waukegan girls baseball team

• I can, but that's all I can add. That and she was a high school freshman in Nov 1928. – Muboshgu (talk) 23:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
  • That's fine

• The next year, Dickshot named the missing some words here

• This better? – Muboshgu (talk) 01:43, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

• Dickshot referred to himself as the "ugliest man in baseball" Awkward placement. Do we know why? This should likely be the first sentence of the section
  • The best I can tell from my research on Mr. Dickshot, he was self-deprecating in regards to his looks. There are other anecdotes that I did not include, but I will collect and add them today or tomorrow. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:09, 27 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Okay, HickoryOughtShirt?4. Check out the expansion to the ugly section and lmk what you think. – Muboshgu (talk) 02:21, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Muboshgu, fantastic! This reads so much better, much appreciated . HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:09, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
• This should be good otherwise . HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:39, 23 March 2021 (UTC)
  • I am passing this now, well done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:09, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

    HickoryOughtShirt?4, thank you! – Muboshgu (talk) 03:22, 28 March 2021 (UTC)