Talk:John Thompson (American football executive)/GA1

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:42, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes[edit]

  • Added an image
  • added cat National Football League general managers
  • don't know his high school?  Done
    • Didn't see it.
  • his birthdays not in that source  Done
    • Added a source w/birthday.
  • where'd you get he was born in WA?  Done
    • I'm not sure, but as I haven't been able to find it again, I removed it.
  • "serving several years as their sports information director" that source doesn't say years  Done
    • Changed to "for a time".
  • the body and infobox both say "Director of management council" but both sources call it "executive" director.  Done
    • Changed.
  • "From 1961 to 1970, Thompson served as the publicity director and assistant general manager " he wasn't assistant GM that whole time. Source says he became that later. Revise infobox also maybe  Done
    • Changed.
  • "for a expansion" an  Done
    • Fixed.
  • "and Jack Patera was named Coach of the Year" remove jack and link coach of the hear to Sporting News NFL Coach of the Year  Done
    • Done.
  • link Greater Seattle Chamber of Commerce  Done
    • Done.
  • any other post football job or personal life  Done
    • Added a little bit that I could find.
  • later life needs to say he died in las vegas  Done
    • Added.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:06, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 16:03, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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