Talk:Japanese battleship Hiei/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk) 12:51, 19 August 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
In the 1914-1929 section, you say that the ship was placed in reserve in 1920 but then conducted a cruise of China in 1919. This should be in chronological order.I think there are some Engvar issues; ex: armour but demilitarization.The last para is really long, could you split that somewhere?Oh, I had thought of this during my initial review but then forgot to list it here. You should link to armor-piercing shot and shell in the armament section.Parsecboy (talk) 17:40, 19 August 2010 (UTC)
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
You might want to explain the bit about sinking the Imperator Nikolai I though (i.e,. explain that it had been taken into Japanese service and then sunk as a target). I imagine it's not clear now to non-experts what was going on there.You should spell out the connection between WWI and the Washington Treaty (people might read it and think "what? WWI was over 5 years before the WNT"). Also add when the treaty was signed (a year is fine, I think).I expect this is a typo, but in the demilitarization section, you say "at the end of November 1939. On 24 April 1930," That should be November 1930, right?
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Is there a source for File:HieiB17Nov13.gif - anyone should be able to tell it's a USAF photo, but it'd be nice to have the source.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall: