Talk:Ismail I/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Seyyed (talk · contribs) 19:29, 19 July 2014 (UTC)

This article is clearly incomplete and does not cover major aspects of Ismail's life. More information should be added regarding the following issues:

• Child: Ismael's life in Estakhr and Gilan
• Campaigns in Iran:

Ismail's war against Aq Qoyunlu

Establishment of a new government in Tabriz

Wars against the local powers to unify Iran

• Diplomatic relations with Mamluks of Egypt and Venice.
• Religious policies including changing the official religion into Shia, leadership of Qizilbash, invitation of Arab Shia shcolars, etc.
• Legacy: Establishment of new central government in Iran and unification of the country.
• Criticism against Ismail's policies.

I hope you can add all of these information in the article.

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There is no any improvement in the past 10 days. Thus, the article is failed.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   Well referenced.

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   Well referenced.

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: --Seyyed(t-c) 15:13, 30 July 2014 (UTC)

GA nomination failed.--Seyyed(t-c) 09:03, 1 August 2014 (UTC)