Talk:Honour Roll Clasp

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Grammar[edit]

I unfortunately don't really have time to edit this for grammar right now, but the grammar of this article is pretty awful. Lots of run-ons, random changes in tense, starting sentences with 'Or' (generally frowned upon, I believe). I've stuck a copy-edit tag on here, so if anyone gets a chance to fix it, that'd be cool. 139.147.75.169 (talk) 01:05, 2 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Nevermind, done. I'll leave the tag for now, in case I missed anything139.147.75.169 (talk) 01:22, 2 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Article cleanup[edit]

I cleaned up the article by removing non-notable and / or unreliably cited material. Please let me know if there are any concerns. K.e.coffman (talk) 16:17, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Well the whole article is pretty well gutted, not just a "clean up". The unreferenced tag is only from April and it is not like the article was made up of a lot of bias or pov content. I will work on it when I have time. Kierzek (talk) 16:49, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Rewritten, ce, additions done, RS cited. Next time please used a little more discretion and patience before wiping out the majority of an article. Kierzek (talk) 11:47, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]