Talk:History of Christianity in Sussex

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Orphaned references in History of Christianity in Sussex[edit]

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of History of Christianity in Sussex's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "diochi":

From Archdeacon of Hastings: "Chichester Diocese Website". Diocese of Chichester. Retrieved 26 May 2013.
From Archdeacon of Horsham: "Chichester Diocese Website". Diocese of Chichester. Retrieved 17 January 2011.
From Archdeacon of Chichester: Diocese of Chichester Website

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 08:36, 7 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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