Talk:Hawaii Five-0 (2010 TV series) season 8

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: AmericanAir88 (talk · contribs) 00:18, 28 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I believe we have met before. (Hawaii Five-0 2010 TV series)

Welcome to the review for Hawaii Five-0 (2010 TV series, season 8). My reviews are all about your voice as I will simply post issues and you will do the work solving them. If necessary I will make very minor copy edits to the article if I feel they don't need a whole bullet point dedicated to them. Anyway, I am looking forward to working with you. AmericanAir88 (talk) 00:18, 28 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Yes we have! You reviewed my previous nomination (as you said Hawaii Five-0 (2010 TV series)). I know this article is considerably shorter than that one but I believe it meets the criteria. I look forward to working with you again! TheDoctorWho (talk) 00:25, 28 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Issues[edit]

@TheDoctorWho:

~~The lede needs a huge expansion, it needs plot, casting, and ratings.~~
~~For the lede, can you please include ratings like the other articles on seasons of the show.~~
For the lede, can you give some background on the season. Give some of the main ideas and focus of the season, just do not spoil anything.
~~In the "reception" section, only a list of ratings is included. Can you add a section to talk about some reviews and public opinion (make them notable).~~
~~Please expand "production" with maybe a development or writing section.~~
Any accolades for the season?
~~Would this page benefit from a release/marketing section?~~

AmericanAir88 (talk) 13:33, 29 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I should have time to start on this tonight. Thanks again for reviewing this!! TheDoctorWho (talk) 21:36, 29 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@AmericanAir88: Alright for the lede ratings have been added. I added a critical response part to the reception section and added a Home video release section. I couldn't find any accolades for the season but I'll take a second look in the morning. That should take care of points 1, 3, 5, and 6. Most of any development or writing information is included under the basic "production" header because I didn't think it was enough info to split but I'll also take a second look for that in the morning. As for the second bullet point do you have in example??(Most season articles I see don't cover plot in the lede.) TheDoctorWho (talk) 07:25, 30 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Issues Two[edit]

@TheDoctorWho: Great job so far.

For the lede, can you give some background on the season. Give some of the main ideas and focus of the season, just do not spoil anything. Not really plot but more what is going on and themes.
Any accolades for the season? Any awards won?

AmericanAir88 (talk) 15:29, 1 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@AmericanAir88: Alright expanded the lede more giving information on episode count, season 9 renewal, and a bit more info on the overview of casting. Took a second look for accolades and still couldn't find any for the season. TheDoctorWho (talk) 22:51, 2 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@TheDoctorWho: Looks fantastic, passing. AmericanAir88 (talk) 01:31, 3 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@AmericanAir88: Thank you so much!! TheDoctorWho (talk) 01:33, 3 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]