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DVR ratings[edit]

Below is a table of all season one episodes with two ratings columns, first is the million who saw it live, the second is the millions who saw it on Live+7 DVR. Hawaii Five-0 is one of those shows that has large increases from DVR viewing. -- Matthew RD 20:28, 4 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

№	Episode	Air date	U.S. viewers (million)	18-49 rating	Live+7 viewers (million)	18-49 rating (Live+7)	Ref
1	"Haʻiʻole"	September 19, 2011 (2011-09-19)	12.188	3.4	15.789	4.6	[1]
2	"Ua Lawe Wale"	September 26, 2011 (2011-09-26)	11.257	3.2	14.935	4.4	[2]
3	"Kameʻe"	October 3, 2011 (2011-10-03)	11.070	3.2	14.463	4.3	[3]
4	"Mea Makamae"	October 10, 2011 (2011-10-10)	10.070	2.7	13.284	3.8	[4]
5	"Maʻemaʻe"	October 17, 2011 (2011-10-17)	11.073	3.1	14.385	4.2	[5]
6	"Ka Hakaka Maikaʻi"	October 24, 2011 (2011-10-24)	10.734	3.1	14.119	4.3	[6]
7	"Ka Iwi Kapu"	October 31, 2011 (2011-10-31)	10.598	3.0	14.101	4.1	[7]
8	"Lapaʻau"	November 7, 2011 (2011-11-07)	10.318	3.1	13.963	4.3	[8]
9	"Ike Maka"	November 14, 2011 (2011-11-14)	11.706	3.3	15.080	4.4	[9]
10	"Kiʻilua"	November 21, 2011 (2011-11-21)	10.592	2.8	14.351	4.1	[10]
11	"Pahele"	December 5, 2011 (2011-12-05)	11.009	3.0	14.367	4.2	[11]
12	"Alaheo Pauʻole"	December 12, 2011 (2011-12-12)	11.291	2.9	14.816	4.2	[12]
13	"Ka Hoʻoponopono"	January 2, 2012 (2012-01-02)	11.896	2.9	15.288	4.1	[13]
14	"Puʻolo"	January 16, 2012 (2012-01-16)	10.731	2.8	14.238	3.9	[14]
15	"Mai Ka Wa Kahiko"	February 6, 2012 (2012-02-06)	9.969	2.7	13.081	3.7	[15]
16	"I Helo Pu"	February 13, 2012 (2012-02-13)	9.696	2.7	12.772	3.7	[16]
17	"Kupale"	February 20, 2012 (2012-02-20)	10.400	2.9	13.666	4.0	[17]
18	"Lekio"	February 27, 2012 (2012-02-27)	9.583	2.5	13.092	3.6	[18]
19	"Kalele"	March 19, 2012 (2012-03-19)	9.308	2.5	12.359	3.5	[19]
20	"Haʻalele"	April 9, 2012 (2012-04-09)	10.309	2.6	13.417	3.6	[20]
21	"Pa Make Loa"	April 30, 2012 (2012-04-30)	10.836	2.4	14.329	3.5	[21]
22	"Ua Hopu"	May 7, 2012 (2012-05-07)	9.388	2.3	12.413	3.2	[22]
23	"Ua Hala"	May 14, 2012 (2012-05-14)	11.422	2.7	14.423	3.6	[23]
	Average		10.671	2.86	14.032	3.97

May I ask why you're not just adding this to the actual article? It's noteworthy, properly formatted and properly sourced. Once Upon a Time has a great ratings set-up if you're looking for something to emulate. SchrutedIt08 (talk) 00:02, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

To be honest I was initially worried that it would not be noteworthy, so I put them in the talk pages to see what other people think (see also Talk:Fringe (season 3)#DVR ratings that I set up). Now that I know your opinion, I would actually put them in mainspace. But not right now, I have to go to work. -- Matthew RD 08:05, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

added?????[edit]

So when I did it, it was deleted, but when someone else posts the special guest stars it is still there??? Makes no sense... ~~ SebastiaanZ ~~ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.159.251.178 (talk) 22:22, 4 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lauren German[edit]

Has Lauren German been credited in any episodes since her character resigned in ep. 16? Even without a reliable source, I think it may be safe to conclude that she has left the cast, at least for now, given that she hasn't even made any appearances or has been mentioned at all since then. Davejohnsan (talk) 17:43, 5 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No ~ SebastiaanZ — Preceding unsigned comment added by 145.93.237.162 (talk) 13:52, 14 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, but I managed to figure that out in the intervening time. :) Davejohnsan (talk) 22:14, 14 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Hawaii Five-0 (2010 TV series, season 2)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: AmericanAir88 (talk · contribs) 16:16, 10 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be taking this one up per your request.

Dead links and Copy-Vio Issues[edit]

@TheDoctorWho:

Copy-Vio test passes.
Ref 79 is dead
Ref 81 is dead AmericanAir88^(talk) 02:01, 12 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@AmericanAir88: Fixed courtesy of Grey's Anatomy (season 8). TheDoctorWho (talk) 05:55, 12 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Issues[edit]

Lead, cast, and External links[edit]

"The second season ranked #26 for the 2011-12 television season and had an average of 11.83 million viewers.[1] The series was also renewed for a third season."

Further expansion would benefit this sentence. Also, the date of the renewal would add to it. Also citations are not needed in the lead as they can be addressed in reception.

The lead should include the reception the season received. See season one and how it said positive reviews were given.
"The season featured fictional crossovers with NCIS: Los Angeles and concluded on May 14, 2012."

This sentence is awkward as it contains two different topics. Expand the beginning part and tack on the second part somewhere else. Also, crossovers or crossover?

Anything to write about the cast? Any issues or new characters? An single list does not truly explore new characters and issues.
An image of the cast would help. (not required).
The TV.com external link is dead.

@TheDoctorWho: Work on these as I look at other sections. AmericanAir88^(talk) 00:32, 15 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@AmericanAir88: All done except the one about the cast, I can do it I just feel like it would turn into plot which is already covered in the episodes section so just let me know if you think it still needs it and I can add it in. TheDoctorWho (talk) 19:01, 16 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Episodes[edit]

@TheDoctorWho:

Note: Each summary has been recently updated and looked over. I have yet to binge this TV show and am assuming good faith that these summaries pass the GA guidelines. AmericanAir88^(talk) 13:59, 16 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Each "Note" should probably have a citation.
Note: I performed the copy edit on the crossover section.

Notes now have refs. TheDoctorWho (talk) 19:01, 16 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Production[edit]

Nothing major found. Good work.

Release, Reception, and Home release[edit]

@TheDoctorWho:

The release section is very flimsy and could be expanded. Any information regarding the advanced screening or Sunset on the beach?
Is the reception missing "Awards and nominations"? or is the season absent of those.
Any quotes for the critical response?

AmericanAir88^(talk) 14:04, 16 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@AmericanAir88: Maybe it's just not expressed well but the advanced screening is the Sunset on the Beach event if that makes sense? The rest is done. TheDoctorWho (talk) 19:01, 16 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@TheDoctorWho:, The review has finished. Passing. AmericanAir88^(talk) 23:45, 20 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

All looks good. Passing