Talk:Grotesque (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 04:14, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

• Infobox: Add "running time" to the infobox.
• Lede: Add episode overall in the first sentence.
• Lede: It premiered on the Fox network on February 2, 1996. → It premiered on the Fox network in the United States on February 2, 1996.
• Lede: Link Nielsen household rating to Nielsen ratings
• The episode received mostly positive reviews from critics. → The episode received mostly positive reviews from television commentators.
• Reception: "Grotesque" premiered on the Fox network on February 2, 1996 → "Grotesque" premiered on the Fox network in the United States on February 2, 1996
• Reception: Again — The episode received mostly positive reviews from critics. → The episode received mostly positive reviews from television commentators.
• Reception: Reviewer Todd VanDerWerff from The A.V. Club → Todd VanDerWerff of The A.V. Club
• Reception: This is just a suggestion, but. Won't it be best the removed use of the f word in the article. Anyone can read this article! Just a suggestion.
• Reception: awarding it an 8/10 → awarding it an "8 out of 10"

On hold. Good work. TBrandley • talk • contributions 04:14, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I did a minor overhaul of the entire article and fixed a few typos and your suggestions. I removed the instance of the profanity, since its not really needed and can be stated much more concisely, like it is now.--Gen. Quon (talk) 14:47, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Good work. I will promote now. TBrandley • talk • contributions 15:51, 2 June 2012 (UTC)