Talk:George McLachlan/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:16, 1 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"September 1901 - 1964" en-dash.
"fee of £2,000" etc, inflate fees.
"McLachlan joined Clyde and" overlinked and you already mentioned he joined Clyde.
"Football League" do you mean English here? Be specific and link.
"added a brace" link.
"enjoyed a prominent season" in what sense was it "prominent"?
Could link 1926–27 FA Cup#Fourth round proper.
"goal from Hughie Ferguson to " overlinked and no need to repeat first name unless it's ambiguous.
Link "relegated".
"after manager Peter Hodge had" link manager.
"Independent's" the s shouldn't be in italics and use the {{'}} template instead of a regular apostrophe.
"player-coach" link.
"French side Le Havre in 1934–35" which league? Is there a season link for it? Was it top tier?
Link centre-half.
"out Queen's Park trainer" overlinked.
"beating Racing Santander in " from?
"moved to Glasgow following" overlinked,
"employment as a draughtsman for" overlinked.
"died in September" why not have September 1964 instead of just 1964 in his death "date" in the lead and infobox?

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:49, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review, I've amended all of the points above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 19:40, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]