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Did you know... that when Fred Stewart was appointed the manager of Cardiff City F.C., he paid the transfer fee of his first signing himself?

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:23, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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No surprises that there's an article at Manager (association football) which would be relevant here!
Is it worth noting that he appears not to have played football himself?
I would say yes, but I can't say for 100% certain that he never turned out for Stockport in their early years in the local leagues. He and his family were involved with the club for sometime, so may well have laced up at some point. Kosack (talk) 13:25, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
" seek reelection " needs linking too.
" First Division" can be linked since you link Second Division.
And promotion.
"Second Division " is overlinked in the Stockport section.
"ending the year" odd way of describing a football season.
"At the time of his departure, the Athletic News summarised his..." Stewart's instead of his.
" campaign.[6][5]" order.
"Southern Football League" is overlinked in the "Southern League" section.
"£4 a week" worth inflating.
Tottenham is overlinked.
"winning the Welsh Cup two weeks later and added the Charity Shield in" against who?
Stats table needs row/col scopes.
Where are Cardiff City stats ref'd?
Why are "Runner-up" and "Winner" capitalised?
What makes gogogocounty.org RS?
The site is operated by Ian Watts and Marcus Heap who are employed by County as its official historians. Their names are listed on the company directory. Kosack (talk) 13:25, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 17 should be pp.
Could add a "People from Oldham" kind of category here.

That's it, on hold while we deal with this trivia. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 19:18, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for taking a look, I've addressed all of the points above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 13:25, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Great. I made a tiny tweak to get the last ref out of the infobox, feel free to revert if you detest it. I'm promoting this to GA now. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:22, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination[edit]

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 06:25, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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... that when Fred Stewart was appointed as manager of Cardiff City F.C., he paid the transfer fee of his first signing himself? Source: BBC Sport

Reviewed: Stephanie Saland

Improved to Good Article status by Kosack (talk). Self-nominated at 18:35, 9 March 2021 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: Interesting hook from a GA article that is clearly referenced. Just waiting on the QPQ. Echetus Xe 11:30, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@EchetusXe: Thanks for the review, I've added in my QPQ for this now. Kosack (talk) 15:20, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Okay great, good to go then.Echetus Xe 15:38, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]