Talk:Flashes Before Your Eyes/GA1
GA Review[edit]
Hello. I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
- Image:3x08.jpg is not low resolution and needs to be.
- Characters and actors need to be linked the first time they are mentioned. This includes the lead.
- "Charlie Pace (Dominic Monaghan) and Hugo "Hurley" Reyes (Jorge Garcia) conclude that Desmond must be able to see into the future, and they hatch a plan to get Desmond drunk and then tell them what is going on." - seems wordy, maybe --> "Charlie Pace (Dominic Monaghan) and Hugo "Hurley" Reyes (Jorge Garcia) conclude that Desmond must be able to see into the future, and they hatch a plan to get Desmond to get drunk and confess."
- "doesn't" - unless the contraction is in a quote, spell it out
- "Desmond later goes to Penny's billionare father, Charles Widmore (Alan Dale) and asks for his permission in marrying his daughter." --> "Desmond later goes to Penny's billionare father, Charles Widmore (Alan Dale) and asks for his permission to marry his daughter."
- "In an interview, Henry Ian Cusick, who plays Desmond, said shooting the episode was both "fun" and "tiring"." - is there a cite for this?
- I would mention that the episode received mostly positive reviews in the lead.
- "beginning to think the Lost producers have a different definition for the word "answer"." - quotes within a quote use apostrophes instead --> "beginning to think the Lost producers have a different definition for the word 'answer'."
- Henry Ian Cusick is linked twice in reception.