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name of article[edit]

Chris, as I mentioned on the other page, the title of this article has an ideological twist to it that you might wish to address. A different title had been suggested in the outline of daughter articles. Just FYI. You might consider Attempted crossings and casualties... Auntieruth55 (talk) 00:07, 25 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Seconding User:Auntieruth55. Fifelfoo (talk) 11:27, 26 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

1c References for Future FA[edit]

Books bibliographied and linked Fifelfoo (talk) 11:59, 26 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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