Talk:Effie Maud Aldrich Morrison/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:48, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"in the United States," no need to link.
Done

"Cumberland County Welfare Board" any link for Cumberland County?
Done

"Massachusetts on January" comma after Mass.
Done

"(1871-1954)" en-dash.
Done

"Aldrich(1880-1970)," space before ( and en-dash.
Done

"got a job as an " ->"was employed as an"
Done

"Building. the two were" The.
Done

"Philadelphia in 1915" the following year.
Done

"and in 1917 her" and the next year
Done

"and she was running" no need for "she".
Done

"In May of 1931" May 1931.
Done

"her son have filed for" -have.
Done

"where she came up with a concept " where she developed a concept.
Done

"initiated a series of contacts" what does that mean?
Done

"who passed the concept" what does that mean?
Done

"Leon Henderson. Henderson" repetitive.
Done

"the Roosevelt Administration" not sure Admin needs a capital A.
Done

"He transmitted the idea to First Lady Eleanor Roosevelt, who shared the concept with her husband" ehhh?? So, the idea was shared amongst a bunch of people. I'm not sure we need the Chinese whisper version here!
Done

"Thence" bit archaic.
Done

"the Works Progress Administration as" put (WPA) after this.
Done

"spent $30,000 to build" inflate.
Done

"town of Millville, which" overlinked.
Done

"300 acres" convert.
Done

"cottage style" hyphenate.
Done

"for $7 per" etc etc, inflate.
Done

Link "stroke".
Done

That's all I have Doug, enjoy. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:06, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for review. I'll get started on resolving the issues tomorrow, after a good night's sleep.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:14, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Couldn't resist. Addressed all the issues today. Can you take another look at it. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:20, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]