Talk:Effects of Hurricane Georges in Louisiana/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA. It is a nice little article, clearly written. The one problem I have is that it does not follow WP:LEAD which is part of the GA criteria. I have done some minor copy editing of the article which is hopefully OK with you.

Mattisse (Talk) 20:06, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Your concerns are about the background info not being in the main body of the article right? Just as a note, that's how these articles have been written, Effects of Hurricane Isabel in North Carolina has the same format and is a featured article. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 20:12, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I cannot explain why another article became a FA. All I can do is review this article using the current good article criteria. —Mattisse (Talk) 20:39, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I took a shot at it, I hope I did it correctly. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 20:51, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
That's fine. You might add a little more to the lead to cover other aspect of the article not mentioned there, such as preparations. The lead is supposed to be a concise summary of the article, so that anyone just reading the lead and not reading further will get the major points. —Mattisse (Talk) 20:58, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I think I got it now. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 21:04, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Well done! —Mattisse (Talk) 22:02, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Final GA review (see here for criteria)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): Well written b (MoS): Follows relevant MoS
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): Well referenced b (citations to reliable sources): Sources are reliable c (OR): No OR
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): Covers major aspects b (focused): Remains focused on topic
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias: Neutral
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.: Stable
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail: Pass

Congratulations!

Mattisse (Talk) 22:02, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]