Talk:Don't Stop the Music (Rihanna song)/GA1

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Reviewer: (CK)Lakeshade (talk · contribs) 18:19, 15 May 2012 (UTC)

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;References Reference 22 contains a WP:DATE violation; "Retrieved December 28, 2011." --> 2011-12-28 Done/Fixed — Tomica (talk) 19:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC) Lead "It features Rihanna together with two of her friends sneaking into the back of a candy store where is a secret club." ---> where there is a secret club. Done — Tomica (talk) 19:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC) Background and release "Pictured Cameroonian musician Manu Dibango suited" ---> sued. Done — Tomica (talk) 19:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC) Composition "According to the" ---> Accord to (the "the" is pointless). Done — Tomica (talk) 19:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC) Reception "Tom Breihan of Pitchfork Media called the song an amazing bit of euroclub insanity combined with synth and bass." This sentence needs: a)quotes ; b) to be rewritten as it reads biased unless quoted. Done — Tomica (talk) 19:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC) "He continued that the "Don't Stop the Music" is the best single that can have a Jackson's writing credit since his 1997 single "Blood on the Dance Floor" ---> Needs rewritten: I suggest "that has a Jackson writing credit[...]" Done — Tomica (talk) 19:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC) Live performances "Since its release, "Don't Stop the Music" has been a staple of Rihanna's performances" --> in. Done — Tomica (talk) 19:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC) Impact and other versions Change the title, there is no "impact", change to Other versions and covers. Done — Tomica (talk) 19:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC) Copyright File:Don't Stop the Music Single.PNG this needs to be updated, specifically the rations and summary. Updated it. — Tomica (talk) 19:23, 15 May 2012 (UTC) Add the recording location found in the liner notes to the "Recording" in the infobox. Done.— Tomica (talk) 08:58, 16 May 2012 (UTC) "for shipping more than 3 million copies." Since this is the digital era, there is no such thing as "shipping" digital copies; it is thus "sold more than 3 million copies". Unless this had a US CD release I'm not aware of. The same issue is present under Chart performance. Done.— Tomica (talk) 08:58, 16 May 2012 (UTC) "Don't Stop the Music" is a dance-pop song that features a wide variety of rhythmic devices used mainly in hip hop music" why is dance-pop mentioned in the lead while Trance isn't? You mean techno? I added it. — Tomica (talk) 08:58, 16 May 2012 (UTC)

• Alright, I'm not seeing any other issues so I'm passing the article. Nice work. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 23:42, 17 May 2012 (UTC)