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I have deleted throw paragraph because it just isn't aptitude VB for an encyclopaedia article:
Goodfellow and Daley earned a bronze medal in the 2016 Olympic 10m synchro competition in Rio on August 8th. Once again, their 109C dive was their single best dive score and put them in a solid position for a bronze medal. All they had to do was perform a steady sixth dive with a score of 84 or higher. The judges were a bit slow in announcing their sixth dive score, and they waited in anxious anticipation. When the score of 89.64 was finally announced, Daley jumped into the pool in celebration with Goodfellow in tow, which Daley later joked was their seventh dive.
There is just too much enthusiasm, no source provided, and reads like a passage from a fan site or a tabloid newspaper. Let's stick to the facts here. Ground Zero | t 00:18, 10 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
