This article was copy edited by Despayre, a member of the Guild of Copy Editors, on March 5, 2012.Guild of Copy EditorsWikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy EditorsTemplate:WikiProject Guild of Copy EditorsGuild of Copy Editors articles
Re-ordered some of the text, added several wikilinks. Straightened out the chronology as best I could. Fixed some grammatical issues. Added some cite references. (a quick online
search gave some different results for dates), created a Lead paragraph. If you see any changes that seem wrong, or not better, please feel free to revert them, I won't be offended, honest! --Despayre(talk) 21:13, 5 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
