Talk:Chris Field (composer)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 01:19, 1 October 2013 (UTC)
I will handle this review. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 01:19, 1 October 2013 (UTC)
Review[edit]
- The hatnote can be removed per WP:NAMB.
- I assume his date of birth is difficult to find?
- Since you have a citation for his wife, maybe she should go in the infobox.
- Field was raised in the San Fernando Valley. Field played guitar in Los Angeles for a period of time as a young man. Perhaps change the second "Field" to "He" to avoid repetition.
- Reference 1: Playback Magazine should be linked.
That's it! Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 21:11, 1 October 2013 (UTC)
- Response to above GA Review
- Removed hatnote, per WP:NAMB.
- Yes, date of birth was quite difficult to find, didn't come across any info on that in any of the secondary sources during the course of my research.
- Added wife info to infobox.
- Changed 2nd "Field" to "He", good idea for copyedit, thanks.
- Linked Playback Magazine in this reference, thanks for pointing that out.
Thanks again for the GA Review, — Cirt (talk) 17:50, 2 October 2013 (UTC)