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Biography: Military

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Lead needs to be expanded to better summarize the article, and biography needs expansion in the non-military aspects of his life. Also needs to be copy-edited for items such as "Portland. Oreg" which make the artilce look like a copy & paste. Aboutmovies 02:30, 26 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]