Talk:Change 123

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"As a result of their rigorous training, she developed three distinct personalities..."

This is basically said three times in the article. Stop it. --149.4.205.174 (talk) 22:31, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Sorry for all the edits

When I got here there were so many typos and grammar errors than you could shake a stick at. Please don't delete my contributions. It took long enough to put them up. If you have any questions or suggestions feel free to tell them to me. I didn't vandalize or do anything wrong so administrators please don't get mad. I hope I have done good here for this page. It you have any legitimate discrepancies feel free to talk here and I'll see what we can do. If you want to add your own contributions/corrections feel free to do so. Cali boi16 (talk) 00:24, 27 September 2009 (UTC)

The problem that I see with the article is that there is a ton of unsourced material regarding the manga's content, and some of the language and phrases used are very POV. Honestly, you would do better to cull all but the most important material regarding each character, and link what's left either to pages from the manga, or from outside sources that discuss the manga's content. Hope this helps. Willbyr (talk | contribs) 02:20, 19 November 2009 (UTC)

Trash material

This information, while probably an accurate synopsis, was absolutely useless in format.

This may in fact be the case, due to the events that take place after Hibiki finally merges with Zero. This event comes about after Hibiki flys into a rage and merges with Zero in order to attack Sora for her perceived mistreatment of Kosukegawa. After seeing Sora throw Kosukegawa's treasured "Kamen Raider" tapes into a trash can after he lends them to her, Hibki snaps. She brutally attacks Sora. However Kosukegawa is made aware of this fight and tries to intervene. Hibiki, now merged with Zero, attacks him by strangling him with his scarf, a present from HiFuMi and Motoko. After seeing the incredible pain she is causing Kosukegawa, Hibiki is able to regain her composure and take control of Zero at last. With all three personalities finally having taken control of Zero, they have essentially overcome the repressed rage deep inside of Motoko's heart. At that moment Motoko finally remembers her last memory of her mother before she died, something she had repressed since the accident. Angry that her mother needs to work and miss Motoko's kindergarten "Sports Meet", she argues with her mother tearfully. Her last words to her mother before she is killed in her accident are " You can just die mother!" At that instant, a truck carrying heavy metal beams loses control, and Motoko's mother is hideously crushed before the child's very eyes. This terrible recollection causes Motoko to suddenly disappear without warning. After the incident with Sora being attacked by Zero, Motoko is soon suspended from school for two-weeks. Despite still being able to graduate, HiFuMi is disheartened by Motoko's unexpected disappearance, and the fact that she has not yet reappeared. They are suddenly left to make a big decision in regards to their future on their own. One day, Fujiko is visited at home by Kisaragi-sensei. There she is told that she has exactly one-year to make an important decision: to live her life as an outcast in regular society, or to cut all ties to her old life and join her true family at the side of her grandmother, Sakura. There, living among her family in a "fatherless society" made up entirely of illegitimate children, her abilities will be a true asset and her disorder can no longer be a secret. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.12.229.83 (talk) 10:02, 4 February 2010 (UTC)