Talk:Bye Bye Nerdie/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 14:11, 12 June 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: "In the episode, when she becomes the target of a female bully named Francine, Lisa discovers a scientific reason as to why bullies pick on nerds and demonstrates her findings at a science conference." -> "In the episode, after Lisa becomes the target of a female bully named Francine, she discovers a scientific reason as to why bullies pick on nerds and demonstrates her findings at a science conference."
  • Done! Theleftorium ^(talk) 09:48, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
• Production: "twelfth season of The Simpsons (2000–2001)" -> "twelfth season of The Simpsons (2000–01)"
  • Done! Theleftorium ^(talk) 09:48, 17 June 2012 (UTC)
• Personally, I would change the "Release" heading to "Reception", but not a biggie
  • Yeah but since the section covers more than the reception I thought this heading was a bit more appropriate. Theleftorium ^(talk) 09:48, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

Those are the only issues I could spot. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 13:48, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium ^(talk) 09:48, 17 June 2012 (UTC)