Talk:Barrackpore Trunk Road/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:43, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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  • "along it, like the" say "including" rather than "like".
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Once the areas around the road..." do you mean in the past?
    • Yes  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "It has a major intersection..." which It? the previous sentence discusses metro stations/lines.
  • "Barrackpore Chiria More" what is Chiria More?
  • "of Barrackpore, Titagarh, Khardaha, Panihati, Kamarhati, Baranagar and" all overlinked.
    •  Done Linked "baranagar" to "baranagar municipality"  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"The West Bengal State Highway 1 and State Highway 2 runs through it.[3] " again, we've lost what "it" is here.

    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  19:19, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "was less than " fewer than.
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link flyover.
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:42, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "with National Highway 16 and 19" Highways.
    •  Done
  • "respectively at Dunlop" comma after respectively.
    •  Done
  • "notable mills were" included instead of were. And delete etc.
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  19:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Other notable landmarks include" "Other notable landmarks along the route include"
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  19:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • BT Road or B.T. Road?
  • "Baranagar–Barrackpore Line" unlink Barrackpore, it's confusing and the Kolkatta line 5 is linked above.
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  19:09, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "As of May 2021, only" not referenced.
    • There is no direct reference for this. Line 1 is operational, and construction for Line 5 never started. I changed it to just 2021.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:51, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "from Palta Waterworks to " don't use two links side by side like this, it's confusing.
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:51, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Today there are six pipelines of 42–70 in (110–180 cm) diameter" see WP:CURRENTLY and don't link basic English words like "diameter".
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  19:21, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "5.77 km (3.59 mi)" and "18.1 km (11.2 mi)" be consistent with level of precision.
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  19:06, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • " 5 point crossing" this was "5-point crossing" earlier.
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  19:01, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Refs are squashed by the bottom image, consider removing, repositioning or using the {{clear}} template.
    •  Done  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:58, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Be consistent, some of your refs have publication dates, some don't.
    • Refs without dates are websites of the institutes/buildings, used as source for their address.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  19:01, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have on a very quick first pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:01, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man I have tried to solve the issues stated above. Please check...  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  19:23, 29 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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