Talk:Bad Blood (2004)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
Two featured bouts were featured on hmm. very very similar to Bad Blood 2003. Featured is repetitive.- WWE's brand, a storyline expansion of the promotion where employees are assigned to wrestling brands "{WWE's brand)" isn't a storyline expansion. Raw, SD, and ECW are but "WWE's brand" is not
- I think I got it.
The main rivalry rivalry repetitive.World Heavyweight championship capitalize the "c" in championshipOn the May 24 episode of Raw, Triple H pleaded with Bischoff to lift Michaels suspension and reinstate him back in the roster, when did Michaels get suspended?the roster were in unsuccessful in doing so. ---> the roster was unsuccessful in doing so.- The result of the fight gave Bischoff the authority to schedule how did the result of a fight give him authority?
- He had enough with HBK and Triple H attacking each other, that he scheduled the HIAC match.
- Explain that in the article iMatthew (talk) 20:23, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
World Heavyweight championship again with the lowercase "c"keep consistency with "championship" and "title" pick either "World Heavyweight Championship" or "the title"[performed a chokeslam] lifted Eugene by the throat and slammed him down to the mat remove [performed a chokeslam] and end the link at "slammed"Intercontinental champion the lowercase "c" again (twice more)Intercontinental title keep consistency again (twice more)remove ["killed off"]- explain a legend vs. legend killer match
- make it two on one could use better wording
Jargon for removal: spinning heel kickJargon for removal: Arm trap crossfacesecurity wall --> security barricadeRemove this sentence "Back and forth action took place between Orton and Benjamin."Intercontinental title againRemove this sentence "The match was controlled by Victoria, Stratus, Lita, and Kim in several spots in the match."Lita then drove Kim's head into the mat, as Lita went for the pin, Stratus rolled Lita up for the pinfall victory, thus Stratus' becoming Women's champion for a fifth time. run-on. split into two sentences.- Jargon for removal: feint leg drop
World Heavyweight title, againThe Divas match and the Eugene/Coachman match are preliminary matches. Only the last two are main event matches, so change the first sentence of the WHC paragraph to the first main event match.- Triple H got the advantage, as he was able to counter a drop Michaels on his head do you meant "to counter AND drop Michaels on his head"
Triple H bring the steel steps and hit Michaels with it change to "with them"and performed a dove with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest --> and performed a dive with his elbow cocked onto Triple H's chest- other on-screen talent should be in the event section
- write at the start, that Lita being pregnant was scripted
World Heavyweight championship, twice againWorld Heavyweight title, thrice again- This scenario led to Edge to sneak behind Orton and speared him. tense issues
Intercontinental championship, again- Canadian Online Explorer should be in italics.
refs are not needed in the results table, and link everything in the table as it is an exception to WP:OVERLINK- Online World of Wrestling, PWWEW.net, ProWrestlingHistory, have not been proven reliable, so they all need to be replaced
the publisher needs to be changed from WWE to World Wrestling Entertainment.
Long list, but you have a week to complete it. Best of luck, iMatthew (talk) 17:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)