Talk:Audrey Pauley/GA1
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 02:53, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
Issues[edit]
General[edit]
- No dab links. Great work!
- No dead links. Great work!
- Non-free images have good rationales.
Infobox[edit]
- Infobox Television episode should be "Infobox television episode" (extremely picky)
- Per MOS:PUNCT, "Consistent use of the straight (or typewriter) apostrophe ( ' ) is recommended, as opposed to the curly (or typographic) apostrophe ( ’ )." That being said, I see that Barreiro’s and Barreiro’s Daughter use that when they should use '
Lede[edit]
- Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK
- Add comma after "Maeda"
- I'm not so sure. Commas should be used to separate potential sentences and natural pauses. If it was "It was written by Steven Maeda and it was directed by Kim Manners", a comma would be needed, but right now, I don't think its warranted.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:43, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
- "unconnected to the series' wider mythology" should be "a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the overarching fictional history of The X-Files"
- "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 4.8 and was viewed by 5.1 million households" should be "The episode earned a Nielsen household rating of 4.8, being watched by 5.1 million households in its initial broadcast"
- "It received mostly positive reviews from television critics." should be "It has generally received positive reviews from television critics."
- ""Audrey Pauley" guest starred Tracey Ellis as the titular Audrey Pauley". Too many "Audrey Pauley's", consider re-write that
Plot[edit]
- Add actor for Steven Murdoch
- Steven Murdoch → Stephen Murdoch
- Add actor for Mr. Barreiro
- "some sort of Hell". Hell shouldn't be in capitals
- "some sort of Hell". isn't encyclopedic. Re-write
- Add actor for various more
Production[edit]
- Consider adding an image. Perhaps: File:Kimmannersxfiles.jpg
- Add comma after "Steven Maeda"
- The Little Prince should not be in quotes. It should be italics
Broadcast and reception[edit]
- "Audrey Pauley" originally aired on the Fox network in the United States on March 17, 2002 and in the United Kingdom on BBC One on January 26, 2003.[3] During its initial broadcast, the entry was viewed by 5.1 million households[nb 1] and ranked as the 68th most watched episode of television that aired during the week ending March 17.[8] It received a Nielsen household rating of 4.8, meaning that it was seen by 4.8% of the nation's estimated households" re-write to: ""Audrey Pauley" originally aired on the Fox network on March 17, 2002, and was first broadcast in the United Kingdom on BBC One on January 26, 2003.[3] The episode's initial broadcast was viewed by approximately 5.1 million households[nb 1], making it the the sixty-eighth most watched episode of television that aired during the week ending on March 17.[8] "Audrey Pauley" earned a Nielsen household rating of 4.8, meaning that roughly 4.8 percent of all television-equipped households, were tuned in to the episode.
- Anyway you can add Nielsen share
- "The episode received mostly positive reviews from television critics" should be "The episode has generally received positive reviews from television critics."
Notes[edit]
- Nothing
References[edit]
- Ref. 7: Unlink The X-Files: The Complete Ninth Season, and 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment as it is already linked above
External links[edit]
- Nothing