Talk:Al-Fa'iz bi-Nasr Allah/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 18:24, 11 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Will take this on. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 18:24, 11 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria[edit]

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
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2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y
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3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
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5.a Y
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6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y
Passes spot checks Y

Discussion[edit]

Prose Suggestions[edit]

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede[edit]

Suffering from epileptic seizures, al-Fa'iz died at the age of eleven currently merely suggests he died of a seizure, suggest Suffering from epileptic seizures, al-Fa'iz died of one at the age of eleven

Life[edit]

he was mutilated and killed by being beaten to death by the palace women suggest simplifying to he was mutilated and beaten to death by the palace women
@Cplakidas: That is all of my suggestions; a fascinating article. Passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 23:47, 11 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the review and the suggestions, Iazyges, they have been implemented. Constantine ✍ 07:57, 12 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]