Talk:Adele One Night Only/Archive 1

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Archive 1

Who was the drummer?

Does anyone know who the drummer is? 2600:1006:B0E5:3C82:8184:2BAB:9C6F:CB88 (talk) 21:28, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

GA Review

Passed. Pseud 14 (talk) 17:43, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Pseud 14 (talk · contribs) 14:30, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Grabbing this one as I may have some familiarity with concerts or television special. Plus, I thoroughly enjoyed watching this when it aired. I will review in the next couple days. My second dabble within the GAN review space (so apologies if it will be a bit slow). Pseud 14 (talk) 14:30, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

previously-unheard songs -- perhaps unreleased songs?
as well as previously released material -- as well as material from her previous albums or maybe tracks/singles from her previous albums, just so "released" isn't repeated

Background

which featured her performing for a crowd -- maybe an audience is much better

Synopsis

Maybe mention the actual filming location in Winfery's home in Montecito in the beginning and just give the second para lead a little tweak
beeped using a three-second delay -- maybe censored using a three-second delay. Could benefit linking to broadcast delay as well

Reception

the special had 9.92 million primetime viewers -- could use either drew or attracted
primetime could be omitted as well, as this is assumed to be the live audience ratings as it aired, so viewers will suffice.
Assuming this is the journalist Lorraine Ali. It could benefit linking.
but he was positive about the proposal - could use the correct pronoun (she) if this is meant to refer to Lorraine.

Set list

OK

Broadcast

Add full name Reference(s) to the abbreviation

Awards and nomination

I would use Ref(s) and Reference(s) in the table so it is both consistent.

References

Since source names have been mostly linked, so as a matter of consistency:

Link Deadline to Deadline Hollywood
Ref 17 missing source name
Ref 29 pipe CBS Sacramento to KOVR
Ref 55 link to ABS-CBNnews.com

Copyvio score 25.4% acceptable and seems ok as it is use of quote.

Media

File:Adele - One Night Only.jpeg with appropriate FUR for non-free image - OK

Final comments and verdict

@MaranoFan: I have finished my review and have put this on hold until after comments are addressed; great job on a very high quality work! Pseud 14 (talk) 16:12, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

Thank you very much for taking up this review, Pseud 14! I have actioned all of your comments and addressed them, along with some copyediting. Let me know if the revisions are satisfactory. Hope everything is well!--N Ø 16:26, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

Looks good. Passing. Pseud 14 (talk) 17:36, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

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Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk) 16:46, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

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Article history

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... that during the filming of Adele One Night Only, a male attendee blindfolded his partner of seven years and proposed to her? Source: Rolling Stone
- ALT1: ... that Adele's Emmy-winning television special, Adele One Night Only, was the most-viewed entertainment special since Oprah with Meghan and Harry? Source: Billboard, Deadline Hollywood
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Beyond the Wall (2023 book)

Improved to Good Article status by MaranoFan (talk). Self-nominated at 17:58, 7 June 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Adele One Night Only; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

Good Article promotion, easy review. I didn't see any writing issues or copyvio problems. Very well-referenced, too. No preference between the two hooks, both are cited in the article. Kafoxe (talk) 20:19, 7 June 2023 (UTC)