Talk:Ability (Fringe)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 20:23, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Ok, put me down for a review for this one. Fringe will be a nice change, and this way you'll have a review waiting for you when you're back around. :) Miyagawa (talk) 20:23, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Plot: "discovers that Jones believes she is one of her soldiers in his war" - a bit confusing as I'm not sure who it is referring to here.

Production: Might be worth noting that Jared Harris returned later in the series as well (although I don't think you need to go into the detail about his return being due to the timeline being altered - that might take the article off track a little!).

Three duplicate links, all in the last two paragraphs of the Production section. Image licence is fine.

Other than that, this all looks good. One of the really memorable episodes of Fringe from the first season for me - although I admit I didn't realise it was this one when I started the review! It's the bomb with the lights and David Robert Jones that made this one so good, plus the twist with the typewriter at the end. It felt like this was the start of Olivia's character arc that continued throughout the rest of the series. Miyagawa (talk) 07:55, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

Awesome, thanks for reviewing! I will apply your suggestions upon my arrival back in the US (in Vienna at the moment!) :) A few more days! Ruby 2010/2013 21:16, 11 June 2013 (UTC)

No worries! Miyagawa (talk) 22:28, 11 June 2013 (UTC)

Thanks again for reviewing! I believe I have addressed all of your concerns. I too remember this episode being a rather good highlight of the first season. The series finally seemed to know where it was going. Btw, all of your work with Star Trek articles has tempted me to give one of their many television series a go (perhaps Next Generation, unless you have a better recommendation for newbies? I've only seen the two Abrams films so far). Ruby 2010/2013 17:28, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

Everything looks good, I'm happy for this one to pass as a GA. Miyagawa (talk) 21:42, 14 June 2013 (UTC)