Talk:Aaron Rowand

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Aaron's jersey number at Cal State Fullerton[edit]

Does anyone happen to know what Aaron Rowand's jersey number was while he played at Cal State Fullerton??

  • His number at Cal State was also 33; as can be seen in the picture located here MBob 01:11, 31 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Kncny11 (talk · contribs) 15:56, 28 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I was trying to figure out why this name sounded so familiar. Then I got to go to the Phillies game on the anniversary of the day he smashed his face in making a catch! Kncny11 (shoot) 15:56, 28 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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Infobox and lede[edit]

  • Need citation for his height, weight, and middle name (MLB.com always has all of these)
  • Mention in lede that, in addition to his other 2007 accomplishments, he was an All-Star
  • "in the 2010 World Series" → "in 2010"

Early life and college career[edit]

  • "According to his high school coach, Rowand hit .650 in high school" → "According to his high school coach, Rowand hit over .650 during his time at Glendora" or something to that effect to reduce the repetition of "high school"
  • Link "the Titans" to Cal State Fullerton Titans baseball
  • Pipe "exhibition contest" to exhibition game

Minor league career[edit]

Major league career[edit]

Chicago White Sox[edit]

  • "Used sparingly initially" → "Although he was initially used sparingly" (the double adverb looks a little awkward)
  • "centerfielder" (one word) is used a few times in this section, while "center fielder" (two words) is used elsewhere in the article
  • delink Kansas City Royals in the 2002 section
  • "2002-03 off season" → "2002–03 offseason"
  • Comma after "2002–03 offseason"
  • WL first instance of spring training
  • Comma after "in both of Rowand's two-home-run games, said"
  • Are only the stolen bases a career high? If so, I'd specify that

Philadelphia Phillies[edit]

  • The start of this section seems abrupt as it is, maybe move the paragraph in the prior section beginning "After the season" down here?
  • ""effort and determination."" → ""effort and determination"." per MOS:LQ
  • "bleacherreport.com" → "Bleacher Report"
  • "Thomas Harrigan of MLB.com listed it among the best ever in 2019" → "and, in 2019, Thomas Harrigan of MLB.com listed the catch as among the best ever" (or something to that effect)
  • hyphen to en dash for "and the Phillies won 2–0"
  • "Rowand suffered a broken nose and severe lacerations to his face as a result of the play/catch/whatever"
  • He was set to become a free agent after the 2007 season, yes? That's how I'm reading it
  • spell out the NLDS acronym in its first appearance scratch that, I'm working mostly backwards and saw ALDS spelled out earlier
  • Also rip to Rowand signing with the Giants the year before the Phils took the World Series

San Francisco Giants[edit]

  • "five-year-$60-million" → "five-year, $60 million"
  • delink Giants, mentioned earlier
  • ""if guys have some good years."" → ""if guys have some good years"." per MOS:LQ
  • en dash for "72–90 finish"
  • fill out the NCLS acronym when it's first introduced scratch that, see above
  • "relpaced" → "replaced" in the second paragraph of 2010

Personal life[edit]

  • I don't see the birth dates for his kids listed on his MLB bio
    • You're right, thanks for noticing! I was having trouble finding the dates listed in any reliable source, so took out all info except what is given on mlb.com. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 13:09, 29 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • make spring training lowercase

References[edit]

  • Twitter isn't a great source if there are alternatives, try this ESPN article
  • Usually The New York Post is also not supposed to be used. However, I believe in nuance, and Kevin Kernan is a hugely accomplished baseball journalist, so his coverage falls under the "subject-matter experts" clause of these types of unreliable sources
    • Thanks for bringing this to my attention. I was going to say that Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources said the main concern was with the headlines, not the articles themselves, but consulting it now, it looks like the Post's reputation has suffered since the last time I checked. As you say, though, Kevin Kernan is a subject-matter expert. I'll keep this in mind for future articles. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 03:26, 30 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Just like in the body, "bleacherreport.com" → "Bleacher Report"
  • Some hyphens that should be en dashes in the ESPN sources: "12-10 slugfest" and "4-6 weeks"
  • Chicago Sun-Times is listed as Chicago Sun-Times in [89] and The Chicago Sun Times in [93]; the WP page title suggests that the former is correct

General comments[edit]

  • Broadness and focus are both good, gives a solid overview of his career
  • Stability is good, pretty much one active editor
  • Pictures all look solid
  • Colossally nitpicky thing, but I was told during the Aaron Nola GA review that, per MOS, picture captions don't end in periods
    • I think the exact rule is they don't unless the caption is a complete sentence. These aren't, though, so I took all the periods out. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 03:29, 30 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Largely free of editorializing, maybe a little with regards to the face-breaking catch, but sports journalists regularly refer to it as a great catch
  • Earwig copyvio score looks great at 17.4%!

Sanfranciscogiants17, a smattering of minor things. As always, let me know if you have any questions! Kncny11 (shoot) 19:11, 29 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, I fixed a couple quick typos and this one is ready to go! Kncny11 (shoot) 15:17, 30 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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