Talk:Aaron Martin (footballer, born 1989)/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:58, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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  • Merge first and second para of lead.
  • "Martin began" -> He began...
  • "with Conference South club" non-League.
  • "He joined Coventry" re-joined...
  • "with Bournemouth at" no longer A.F.C. but just AFC.
  • Is there an article for loan?
  • "Saints manager" not sure our readers know who "Saints" are.
  • "2010–11 campaign" campaign inside pipe link. Same for subsequent "season"/"campaign" links.
  • "in the FA Cup on" third round of
  • "substitute" link.
  • "was signed Martin then" comma after signed.
  • "as the Eagles manager" not sure who those are.
  • "League One side Coventry City, where" overlinked.
  • "impressed Sky Blues" who?
  • "transfer embargo" link?
  • "at set pieces and" link.
  • "in English football history" I guess this is in professional football?
  • "his penalty when" link penalty kick.
  • "free transfer" is there a link?
  • "family home in Southampton." overlinked.
  • " 6 feet 3 inches " adj=on.
  • BBC Sport consistent format/link in refs.
  • Ref 8 en-dash.
  • Refs 13, 48, too.
  • Ref 22, Southampton F.C. linked, no other publisher/works linked.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:17, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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