Talk:A Newsboy Hero

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Review: September 20, 2015. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:51, 19 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Another Marie article. I should complete this tomorrow hopefully JAGUAR 22:51, 19 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments[edit]

The leads needs to be expanded slightly to summarise the article
I would recommend splitting plot and production into two sections
"His alcoholism had caused much strife in his home and his wife" - informal
Salvation Army could be linked in the lead
" The Billboard‍ ' review" - typo

Close - promoted[edit]

I had to do a little bit of cleaning up, but this should be good to go. The references are adequate and the article is quite comprehensive given the era. Well done JAGUAR 22:36, 19 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]