Talk:6:02 AM EST/GA1
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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 11:55, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
Comments[edit]
Production[edit]
- Since The A.V. Club is the only outlet that described the episodes as a "three-part third-season finale," the implication that "some" outlets referred to it as that seems a bit confusing.
Reception[edit]
Ratings[edit]
- "with a 1.2/4 ratings share 18–49." Slightly clumsy. You need to address that 18-49 refers to the demographic's age.
- "This was 14 percent fewer viewers than the previous week," "This was" sounds a bit clunky to me. You can replace it with "It was seen by," for example.
In conclusion[edit]
And that's pretty much it, only three minor issues and it's ready for GA. I'll put the article on hold for seven days. Good luck! Queenieacoustic (talk) 11:55, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
- All fixed. Thanks again for the review! Much appreciated, Ruby2010 comment! 19:24, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
- Looks good. Passed! Queenieacoustic (talk) 19:29, 11 June 2011 (UTC)