Talk:2017 FA Community Shield

2017 FA Community Shield has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: December 26, 2017. (Reviewed version).

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Attribution[edit]

The introduction and background is based on other Charity/Community Shield articles, such as this one. Lemonade51 (talk) 19:14, 17 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:2017 FA Community Shield/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Shall review. MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead[edit]

Delink McDonald's per MOS:BOLDAVOID

Background[edit]

"The FA brought the kick-off time an hour earlier" - brought forward
Put The Football Association's acryonyms in brackets after the first time it is mentioned

Pre-match[edit]

"he noted they had kept the spine of their team" - could you clarify what is meant by this phrase by rewording it to encyclopedic language?
"Conte confirmed Eden Hazard and Tiémoué Bakayoko were ruled out of the match with injuries and confirmed Victor Moses would play;" - repetition of confirmed

Team selection[edit]

"he officially took over responsibilities from John Terry in July." -the responsibility

Summary[edit]

The article would be better off if you wrote that the stadium observed a minute's silence for the Grenfell fire victims.

Not sure what you mean exactly by this. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:11, 26 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

On second thought, disregard as I have just found out the meaning of moment of silence and it is the same as you have written in the article.

"The defender was taken off and replaced by Kolašinac," - mention the head injuries as you have done in the first image in the sub-section.
" when he went to ground in the penalty box after a challenge from Héctor Bellerín." - fell to the ground
"a late challenge by Pedro on resulted in the Chelsea attacker being shown a red card." - this sentence doesn't say who Pedro callenged on the Chelsea side that led to his red card.

Post-match[edit]

"describing victory as" - the victory

References[edit]

Ref 16 is lacking an author

That is all I found during my read-through. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 25 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96:, have made corrections, thanks for the review. Just one issue with the Grenfell fire in the summary, could do with clarifying here. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:11, 26 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Lemonade51: See my above response. Apart from that, this article is now at GA status. MWright96 (talk) 19:00, 26 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]