Draft:Pejman Jamilpanah
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Comment: The draft reads like a PR text, and the sourcing does not indicate notability. --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 20:26, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: No source for the date of birth, entire early life section Greenman (talk) 10:59, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Much of this is unreferenced.We read: Jamilpanah's work has garnered recognition and acclaim, and his contributions to the field of intercultural music have been well-received. He continues to contribute to the vibrant music scene in Germany, bridging cultural gaps and fostering understanding through his musical endeavors. Unless the recognition, acclaim, good reception, vibrancy, etc are specified and referenced to reliable sources, this sounds like mere PR material. Hoary (talk) 00:05, 2 June 2023 (UTC)
Pejman Jamilpanah (born 01.11.1982) is an Iranian-German musician, composer, and singer known for his contributions to various music projects and his involvement in intercultural music initiatives.
Early life[edit]
Jamilpanah was born in Kermanshah, he studied music and composition in Tehran. He then graduated in music production and sound engineering from the Academy of Sound, Tehran.[1]
Career[edit]
Jamilpanah produced his own CDs and commissioned works for other musicians, YouTube productions for artists living abroad and wrote arrangements for composer and pianist Anoushiravan Rohani. He also worked as a music teacher for tar, setar and pop guitar, as well as music theory, composition and singing.[2]
In 2015, Jamilpanah relocated to Germany, where he has since been based. In 2016, he became a musician, composer, and singer at "Bridges – Musik verbindet".[1] in Frankfurt am Main. Bridges is an initiative that fosters connections between musicians with and without immigration backgrounds.[2] In this capacity, Jamilpanah plays the tar, setar, and lends his vocal talents to various musical ensembles, including the Bridges Orchestra, the Hope Ensemble[3][4], and the Blue Mango trio[5].
Works[edit]
One of Jamilpanah's notable compositions is "Silk Road" which he created for the Bridges Orchestra. This piece was featured on the CD album of Bridges called "Identigration"[6] and received critical acclaim. The album garnered recognition and was honored with the "Preis der deutschen Schallplatten Kritik" [7](German Record Award) for its outstanding contribution to the music industry.
Throughout his career, Jamilpanah has participated in numerous performances and collaborations, showcasing his versatile musical abilities. He has been involved in projects such as the West-Östlicher Divan[8] and has performed at various venues, including the Evangelische Akademie Frankfurt [9] and Volksbühne Berlin.
Discography[edit]
[2018] – Single: Termeh
[2018] – Single: Silk Road
Awards and recognition[edit]
[2021] – "Preis der deutschen Schallplatten Kritik" for the album "Identigration"[10]
External links[edit]
https://bridges-kammerorchester.de/identigration/
References[edit]
https://www.discogs.com/artist/8822155-Pejman-Jamilpanah
https://www.imago-images.de/st/0084175188
- ^ "Bridges - Kammerorchester". bridgesmusikverbindet.de. Retrieved 2023-06-01.
- ^ Kinsler, Detlef. "Ein interkultureller Höhenflug mit Mozart und Hensel - Bridges – Musik verbindet". Journal Frankfurt. Retrieved 2023-06-01.
- ^ "Verlosung Bridges - Ensemble Hope". www.brotfabrik.de. Retrieved 2023-06-01.
- ^ "Ensemble Hope". Kanal 21 - Medien und Bildung (in German). 2019-09-06. Retrieved 2023-06-01.
- ^ "Bridges - Trio Blue Mango". bridgesmusikverbindet.de. Retrieved 2023-06-01.
- ^ Bridges-Kammerorchester - Identigration, 2021, retrieved 2023-06-01
- ^ "02/2021". www.schallplattenkritik.de (in German). Retrieved 2023-07-24.
- ^ "West-östlicher Divan · Volksbühne im Großen Hirschgraben". Volksbühne im Großen Hirschgraben (in German). Retrieved 2023-06-01.
- ^ "Willkommen in der "Bridges"-Familie". www.evangelisch.de (in German). Retrieved 2023-06-01.
- ^ "02/2021". www.schallplattenkritik.de (in German). Retrieved 2023-07-24.