Template:Did you know nominations/Philomena Franz

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The result was: promoted by Launchballer talk 09:15, 12 May 2024 (UTC)

Philomena Franz

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... that after deportation to Auschwitz, internment in Ravensbrück, escape from a camp near Wittenberge and concealment by a farmer, Romani holocaust survivor Philomena Franz became a writer? Source: https://www.romarchive.eu/en/collection/p/philomena-franz/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Trumpet (ice cream)

Created by Lajmmoore (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 94 past nominations.

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Lajmmoore (talk) 16:30, 14 April 2024 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing: - The last paragraph is cited to IMDb, which per WP:IMDB should generally be avoided in favour of other citations.
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I would prefer more links and would suggest moving the bold link closer to the start of the sentence, but those are optional Lajmmoore. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:13, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

@Lajmmoore: Please respond to the above. Z1720 (talk) 13:57, 2 May 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for the ping Z1720 - this review had slipped my mind. I addressed the reference AirshipJungleman29 but I struggled to link in the camps, whilst still keep the hook under the word count. I have shifted the words round, so:

ALT1... that Romani holocaust survivor Philomena Franz wrote about her deportation to Auschwitz, internment in Ravensbrück, escape from a camp near Wittenberge and concealment by a farmer?Source: https://www.romarchive.eu/en/collection/p/philomena-franz/

Let me know what you think Lajmmoore (talk) 15:38, 2 May 2024 (UTC)

@AirshipJungleman29: Is this nomination approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 15:28, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:33, 10 May 2024 (UTC)