Talk:You Can Dance/GA1
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:40, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
GA reviews are a good distraction from studying for exams...
Lead[edit]
The release is not included in the body of the article
Background[edit]
I recommend a bit more wikifying, including Warner Bros. and the different instruments
Development[edit]
The transition from musical development into album art in the second paragraph is quite stiff. Break it up or smooth it out somehow.
Composition[edit]
Wouldn't the audio sample be more appropriate here?"After the first verse, the sound of keyboard is heard during the effect." - link (the?) keyboard, what you have linked to doesn't seem to be right - 'you can hear the keyboard when it is in chorus with other instruments' is the idea I took from the sentence, which doesn't sit quite right. (Or maybe I'm just reading something wrong...)Link violin"According to the sheet music published at SheetMusicPlus.com..." - is this preamble really needed?"...spanning from the notes of C5 to B♭m" now the only musical experience I have is a few months of piano lessons, but C5 and B♭m surely aren't parallel... what I'm trying to say is 'why doesn't B♭m have a number next to it?'Link middle eight.
Critical reception[edit]
Chart performance[edit]
Not sure about these chart positions "reached a peak of 14" - shouldn't there be a 'number' before each position- you're right.
Track listing[edit]
Source for writers and producers?- Added.
Credits and personnel[edit]
Source?- Added.
References[edit]
The Washington Post is published by The Washington Post Company- Its common notion to not include the self-publishers for such cases. I was advised by the FA reviewers during promoting Madonna that publications like The New York Times, The Washington Post, BBC etc self-publish their content and hence for them adding the publisher as The New York Times Cmopany, The Washington Post Company is redundant. — Legolas (talk2me) 06:34, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
Oh, and a dab link
That's it. Pretty good work, I'll place the review on hold now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 06:04, 12 November 2010 (UTC)