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"with Mike Kinsella and" should this be "with the Kinsellas" per the source?
I thought Mike Kinsella wasn't a member of Joan of Arc until later on (when he actually was at the time of this album, I'm mistaken). Yeepsi (talk) 18:20, 21 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
[1] should solely be at the end of the last sentence
"met with a" → "was met with a"
[1] does not mention those sources calling it unlistenable
Remove or replace ref 14 since it is a bi-weekly tabloid and does not have many staff members
Are you sure ref 15 is reliable; the staff seems to be quite low?
They have a large amount of writers listed here and on the various print editions (the latter is a little annoying as they're listed on separate pages as opposed to all being on one page). Yeepsi (talk) 18:20, 21 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 16 needs to work as a citation so clicking on it directs down to the source
Stylus → Stylus Magazine on ref 24
Pipe Vulture to Vulture.com on ref 28 per MOS:LINK2SECT
@Yeepsi:✓Pass now, only did some very brief copy editing and the sources you provided are acceptable now. --K. Peake 07:54, 22 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]