Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Bocchi the Rock! discography/archive1

Bocchi the Rock! discography[edit]

Featured list candidates/Bocchi the Rock! discography/archive1

Nominator(s): Harushiga (talk) 16:10, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Here's something different from my past FLCs: this is about the discography...of an anime series! Bocchi the Rock! is one of the most popular anime of 2022, which led to its song album selling over 100,000 physical copies and all of its songs appearing in music charts in Japan. This is my fourth nomination, and any feedback would be appreciated as always! Harushiga (talk) 16:10, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

DBC

The "CD singles" table has the non-applicable sentence ' "—" denotes single that did not chart.' Please remove. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 13:22, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@MPGuy2824: Done. Harushiga (talk) 13:33, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Tintor2

Sorry for the delay. I'm not good with music articles but I'll see if I can help:

Shouldn't the first sentence make more heavy emphasis on the discography rather than the origins? "The discography of the anime Bocchi the Rock!...."

Done.

I'm not sure about the wp:lead in FLs but shouldn't every sentence be referenced? At least you could generalize some parts to avoid referencing specific parts.

Per MOS:CITELEAD, information that is sourced within the body no longer needs citations when mentioned in the lead, which is the case here. I've only sourced those that are not found in the body, such as the voice actresses and to verify that "Seishun Complex" is the opening of the anime.

"Watashi Dake Yūrei" Shouldn't you include a nihongo format?

Unless it's for the very first sentence in the lead, I find that Japanese titles in prose kind of disrupts the flow of sentences. That is why I added nihongo templates in the tables rather than the lead.

The body is well formatted. I'm not sure if Japanese titles need a "lit." for the translations though.

The translations are also the official English titles so the "lit." is not necessary.

That's all. Good work with the article. I hope it becomes FL. Ping me once everything is done. @Harushiga: Tintor2 (talk) 21:02, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Tintor2: Hi, I've addressed your comments above. Harushiga (talk) 13:19, 4 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good work. I leave my support. In order to attract more feedback I recommend exchanges like reviewing other articles. I would ask you to Review Musashi Miyamoto (Vagabond) since it was recently nominated by me or Frieren nominated by another user.