Wikipedia:Picture peer review/Parra, nsw.jpg

Paramatta, New South Wales[edit]

Not sure if this would qualify for FP. I just wanted to find out where I have either gone write or wrong with this composition for further improvement with future images. This image is my second upload of the same photo. The first had strange lines on the right hand side of the image but had better height and possibly more W factor (if you could call it that) in the sky. I took this image to help represent the suburb of Parramatta in article mentioned above. The image could possibly be used in the article Bus lane as well

Creator: Adam.J.W.C.

Nominated by: . Adam (talk) 06:15, 29 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Seems to be nice enough quality, quite good lighting, etc, but I'm not overly sold on composition. The dominating features of the photo seem to be the big empty expanse of road, bus lane and footpath, with the bus sign and back of the road sign front and centre - I guess for mine it just lacks anything to really grab the eye. Having said which, I am intrigued how you got the road so empty! I'll leave it up to you. --jjron (talk) 12:28, 30 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Yeh, I think your write. I also thought that the image was a little dark in some areas as well. Thanks for the advice though. Adam (talk) 02:15, 31 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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